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You said
You said you were
A friend
A word I did not
Comprehend
A friend does not
Pretend
To like you when
they end
The conversation with
Lets just be friends
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Re. You said
27th May 2024 7:54pm
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27th May 2024 7:56pm
but you said "lets just be friends"... mmm... make up your mind Fia... just joking... I like keeping you on edge..
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27th May 2024 7:59pm
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27th May 2024 8:03pm
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27th May 2024 8:05pm
you know what.... every time I get a comment from you I just tremble... I don't know why... maybe its the shock of you talking to me ... or maybe its the....
Re. You said
27th May 2024 8:13pm
This one really packs a punch. Love the straightforwardness of it as well.
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Re: Re. You said
27th May 2024 8:16pm
ops... sorry .. hope it didn't hurt much... please forgive me... please please ... please don't say lets just be friends... please please... just joking... of course we are more than just friends
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27th May 2024 8:42pm
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"We can still be friends" is probably worse than "Let's just be friends" because at least you started something with the former phrase whereas the latter sounds more like something pre love. I'm sorry, I have absolutely no idea what 'm talking about, lol! 😐
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Re: Re. You said
27th May 2024 8:48pm
you are right "We can still be friends" is way better... worse of course but better
Re: Re. You said
27th May 2024 8:53pm
"Let's just be friends" is certainly setting boundaries whereas "We can still be friends" at least gives you the option of whether or not to opt in or out of that.
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Re: Re. You said
28th May 2024 00:41am
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28th May 2024 00:47am
Re. You said
28th May 2024 11:58am
Let's just be friends - sorry, couldn't help myself.
It's a short piece, but packs a lot of punch, love this.
It's a short piece, but packs a lot of punch, love this.
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Re: Re. You said
28th May 2024 5:30pm
Re. You said
28th May 2024 8:35pm
Right to the "Friend Zone" with all the other misfit toys (girls and boys).
Although, it is better to cut bait then be strung along.
Although, it is better to cut bait then be strung along.
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29th May 2024 3:00am
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29th May 2024 00:56am
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29th May 2024 3:02am