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I Know You Hate Flowers
The ocean is rising
And I think I see you in the distance
But I can’t quite tell
I am swimming towards you
And the currents pull me back
Is it even you?
Are you on the sand waiting for me?
And I think I see you in the distance
But I can’t quite tell
I am swimming towards you
And the currents pull me back
Is it even you?
Are you on the sand waiting for me?
Published 25th May 2024
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Keep swimming. Keep your head above water. Don't be afraid to extend your hand. You never know when someone will reach out to meet your grasp and pull you back to the shore. It may be someone you know or someone totally unexpected, but you must be willing to reach out. Hang in there girl and remember you're not alone. I'm here and there are others here if you need. 🙂
25th May 2024 4:31am
Just keep swimming, swimming… sorry was thinking of the song Dory sings! I appreciate the advice, thank you :)
25th May 2024 2:07pm
DI is correct, girl. Keep your head above water. You’re doing it.
And I love Dory. You ain’t so bad either💕
And I love Dory. You ain’t so bad either💕
25th May 2024 4:48pm
