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A Bed on Fire
So cold
Frigid to the touch
Sheets of white ice
Laid upon a frozen bed.
Unexpected warmth
Falling ice sickles
Cold flesh goosed.
Eyes
Heated intensity
Mirror’s Gabriel’s Inferno
Cold pushes forward
Heat pushed back
And won
Shirt torn.
From fevered
Flesh
Dress
Melts away
Revealing
Body laid.
And spread.
A crystal butterfly
Smoke rising.
Framing a body
That is there to consume
With a deep intake
Of moistened
Air
His scorching
Staff
Melts
Movement
Ingrained
From the dawn of existence
Dry’s the drenched sheets
First wave
Descends
Crys of
Need
Second wave
Panting
Clawing
Biting
Smoke
Rising
Third wave
Total
Incineration
Fire
Steam
A cacophony
Of screams
Frigid to the touch
Sheets of white ice
Laid upon a frozen bed.
Unexpected warmth
Falling ice sickles
Cold flesh goosed.
Eyes
Heated intensity
Mirror’s Gabriel’s Inferno
Cold pushes forward
Heat pushed back
And won
Shirt torn.
From fevered
Flesh
Dress
Melts away
Revealing
Body laid.
And spread.
A crystal butterfly
Smoke rising.
Framing a body
That is there to consume
With a deep intake
Of moistened
Air
His scorching
Staff
Melts
Movement
Ingrained
From the dawn of existence
Dry’s the drenched sheets
First wave
Descends
Crys of
Need
Second wave
Panting
Clawing
Biting
Smoke
Rising
Third wave
Total
Incineration
Fire
Steam
A cacophony
Of screams
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 24th May 2024
| Edited 28th May 2024
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
24th May 2024 8:17pm
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25th May 2024 2:39am
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25th May 2024 10:26am
Yes! What a steamy piece this is.
Body laid.
And spread.
A crystal butterfly > this just rolls of the tongue.
Body laid.
And spread.
A crystal butterfly > this just rolls of the tongue.
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25th May 2024 7:46pm
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25th May 2024 7:44pm
I had to look up cacophony, wicked ending lines. I definitely enjoyed reading the back and forth between fire and ice.
LJ
LJ
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25th May 2024 7:47pm
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26th May 2024 1:01pm
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26th May 2024 5:02pm
So much imagery in this, I can't even summarize it all. I love the focus on extremes, temperature being your primary metaphor. Hugely sexy and animalistic with a touch of opulence.
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26th May 2024 5:05pm