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dream (in color)
i want
to dream
in color
not just
in black
and white
turning
my dreams
dull gray
i want
the colors
of bright
flowers
to invade
my dreams.
to dream
in color
not just
in black
and white
turning
my dreams
dull gray
i want
the colors
of bright
flowers
to invade
my dreams.
Published 24th May 2024
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24th May 2024 4:14am
I rarely remember my dreams and am now wondering if I dream in colour or not.
It's nice to imagine beautiful colourful dreams.
Nice brevity.
It's nice to imagine beautiful colourful dreams.
Nice brevity.
24th May 2024 4:17am
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Nov 2024 6:45pm
24th May 2024 4:29am
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thank you bcharmed. just woke up, my last dream wasn't in color., maybe next time
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
24th May 2024 5:02am
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24th May 2024 10:41am
24th May 2024 10:28am
Dear J,
What a great concept. I have no idea what color I dream. I enjoyed the lovely flow of this and how you want to create the outcome. H🌷
What a great concept. I have no idea what color I dream. I enjoyed the lovely flow of this and how you want to create the outcome. H🌷
24th May 2024 10:42am
24th May 2024 12:58pm
I wouldn't mind the bright vivid colors of flowers invading my thoughts either.
Cool poem.
Cool poem.
24th May 2024 8:22pm
