Pierce

Killer! I love this declaration that slices write through the page.

The image is perfection. Pierce is a great word.

Thank you so much!

I agree with Debbie. You sliced & diced this poem perfectly. Well executed!!

Many thanks, my friend!

powerful write faith

Thank you so much 💓

I suppose his reply would be a bitter one filled with vile anger. Perhaps familiarity breeds contempt. Perhaps people become unhappy with themselves and take it out on others, or their narcissism prevents them from seeing others as equals. Many questions, huh.

Good one, Faith.

Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it.

Scintillating read

I appreciate your honesty

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.

Wow... this one truly pierces...

Thank you, Lil!

Reminded me of the line from Shakespeare's play "Julius Caesar" _  "Et tu brute".

Your poem calls out the malice of the betrayer.

Thank you, Leo!

Wow, what an amazing write. Love the rhyming pattern and the flow of it.

Those last two lines are nothing short but epic 💕

Thank you for your wonderful remarks.