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ohh mooon...!!!!
i give you my address...oh moon!!!
become a visitor and come to my window someday
it has become difficult to even glimpse you from between tall buildings
my room is waiting for you, be philanthropist and send the rays of your light someday to my lonely bed
when I come to the fragrant garden to look at you
you shyly hide in that rainy clouds,,,Oh moon... tell me what should I do now???
when I fall asleep on the bench looking at you, swarm of fireflies comes and pulls my hands
they hide in my wet hair and makes the night-blooming jasmine feel jealous
you know, i get drenched in sweat every day through the rays of the angry sun
please be humble, and become cold rose water someday and bathe me in your coolness...
become a visitor and come to my window someday
it has become difficult to even glimpse you from between tall buildings
my room is waiting for you, be philanthropist and send the rays of your light someday to my lonely bed
when I come to the fragrant garden to look at you
you shyly hide in that rainy clouds,,,Oh moon... tell me what should I do now???
when I fall asleep on the bench looking at you, swarm of fireflies comes and pulls my hands
they hide in my wet hair and makes the night-blooming jasmine feel jealous
you know, i get drenched in sweat every day through the rays of the angry sun
please be humble, and become cold rose water someday and bathe me in your coolness...
Published 23rd May 2024
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Anonymous
23rd May 2024 11:02am
Beautiful...
24th May 2024 2:10pm
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23rd May 2024 4:42pm
I will cum and spread my load inside your sweet sexy wet pussy. Keep on writing.
24th May 2024 2:11pm
24th May 2024 2:09am
This is really good Dimpy. And I am very impressed. It's truly poetic. I'm applauding it and you!
And, regardless of how many comments you get,( because it isn't "erotic", and some readers literally only look for pornish material, obviously), this is a stellar write from you and you should be very proud of it.
I'd say it's one of your best and I love the fact that you put in the effort to write something like this. I am happily impressed.
Be proud of it. You should be.
And, regardless of how many comments you get,( because it isn't "erotic", and some readers literally only look for pornish material, obviously), this is a stellar write from you and you should be very proud of it.
I'd say it's one of your best and I love the fact that you put in the effort to write something like this. I am happily impressed.
Be proud of it. You should be.
24th May 2024 2:18pm
Hey Styx
hope you are well
I'm so glad that my poetry impressed you so much. ya I agree on dup people mostly like erotic stuff. n I also write, but now maybe they don't like my stuff much.. well your such beautiful reaction is unbelievable for me...greatly appreciated...
Anonymous
26th May 2024 4:45pm
👏👏👏👍👍
26th May 2024 4:47pm
