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Do you Remember?
The brief touch of a hand
The flush on your face from the first look
The difficulty of taking a breath
The first hello
The first step closer
The first scent
The dryness of your mouth
Your pulse racing at your neck
The feather-light touch on the cheek
The lowering of lips
The brief pause before soft lips touch
The minuscule parting to be place back again
Do you remember or did your thoughts leave you at that moment and only instinct prevailed?
The flush on your face from the first look
The difficulty of taking a breath
The first hello
The first step closer
The first scent
The dryness of your mouth
Your pulse racing at your neck
The feather-light touch on the cheek
The lowering of lips
The brief pause before soft lips touch
The minuscule parting to be place back again
Do you remember or did your thoughts leave you at that moment and only instinct prevailed?
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 21st May 2024
| Edited 22nd May 2024
Author's Note
Memory has a way of recreating beautiful moments.
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Re. Do you Remember?
21st May 2024 12:47pm
I remember the feelings...the rest is lost in the moment. Well done!
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21st May 2024 1:23pm
Re. Do you Remember?
21st May 2024 4:35pm
I never had those... so no I don't remember.. but if I did I couldn't have described it better
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21st May 2024 4:47pm
Re. Do you Remember?
22nd May 2024 3:13am
So seductive. I think first times are always burned indelibly in our brains.... and then there was yesterday, and last night. But anticipation could be the highest high.
Love your piece
Love your piece
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Re: Re. Do you Remember?
22nd May 2024 3:15am
Yes, it is the anticipation. You want it but it's a natural endorphin rush.
Thank you. Fia xoxo
Thank you. Fia xoxo
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