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Hopeful Sunshine
A day of ruin
A day of gloom
No flowers shall bloom
Darkness and distress
Trying to take a chance....
To fall in love again
(seems too impossible)
Reckless fights
Flawless hugs
Dreamy nights
Followed by dreary days
Feels like feelings falling apart
Or is it love, a new start?
A day of gloom
No flowers shall bloom
Darkness and distress
Trying to take a chance....
To fall in love again
(seems too impossible)
Reckless fights
Flawless hugs
Dreamy nights
Followed by dreary days
Feels like feelings falling apart
Or is it love, a new start?
Published 8th May 2012
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Anonymous
8th May 2012 1:00pm
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8th May 2012 1:37pm
9th May 2012 5:57pm
Personal honest critic- I dislike that it is a love poem. Cos the start points otherwise...
But that aside,
This is a great piece!
The topic fits perfectly, and its simplicity is elegant..
Finely written!
But that aside,
This is a great piece!
The topic fits perfectly, and its simplicity is elegant..
Finely written!
