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pink peace
she comes
dripping
fragrant
drops from
her wet hair,
and arches
her back
on the bed
of bloomed
roses...
he comes
from behind
and joins
asana with
ferocious intensity
and dives
into a warm
tunnel
full of honey...
he hits the
wall and
sliding
in and out
a centimeter
at a time...
when their
orgasm peaks
and the feeling
of his cum
filling her tunnel,
creates
waves of
tingling
sensations
through their body...
dripping
fragrant
drops from
her wet hair,
and arches
her back
on the bed
of bloomed
roses...
he comes
from behind
and joins
asana with
ferocious intensity
and dives
into a warm
tunnel
full of honey...
he hits the
wall and
sliding
in and out
a centimeter
at a time...
when their
orgasm peaks
and the feeling
of his cum
filling her tunnel,
creates
waves of
tingling
sensations
through their body...
Published 16th May 2024
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16th May 2024 3:57pm
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16th May 2024 5:07pm
I like tingling… tingling is good…do you always tingle your readers like that ?!
16th May 2024 5:12pm
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16th May 2024 7:40pm
You always get us tingling as here! Poem gives immediate impression she has come onto the bed after readying herself in a shower. Beautiful romantic picture. Favourite verse
he comes
from behind
and joins
asana with
ferocious intensity
and dives
into a warm
tunnel
full of honey...
he comes
from behind
and joins
asana with
ferocious intensity
and dives
into a warm
tunnel
full of honey...
17th May 2024 3:13am
17th May 2024 3:37am
First of all, love the title... potential double entendre. Not sure if you intended that, but still...
Such an erotic, succulent image with a certain raw edge to it. I particularly love the alliteration in the first stanza.
Sometimes, all you want to do is capture a moment in its bright ferocity. I can see this so clearly. I can hear it through the walls.
Captivating...
Such an erotic, succulent image with a certain raw edge to it. I particularly love the alliteration in the first stanza.
Sometimes, all you want to do is capture a moment in its bright ferocity. I can see this so clearly. I can hear it through the walls.
Captivating...
17th May 2024 12:02pm
my intention was definitely to show the pink parts of girl's body... I am glad nd surprised that you understood that double meaning...
21st May 2024 00:54am
21st May 2024 3:35am
