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Plagued
Unquenchable thirst.
Insatiable hunger pain
Monster opens eyes.
Scent of a ripe soul.
Dreaming in sweet denial.
Heart's blood thick with need.
Sharp fangs puncture flesh
Feasting on her naked neck.
Dark ecstasy soothed
He left her for dead.
Ravaged human innocence.
Beast's belly was full.
Insatiable hunger pain
Monster opens eyes.
Scent of a ripe soul.
Dreaming in sweet denial.
Heart's blood thick with need.
Sharp fangs puncture flesh
Feasting on her naked neck.
Dark ecstasy soothed
He left her for dead.
Ravaged human innocence.
Beast's belly was full.
Published 16th May 2024
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Tried writing four haiku's to construct a poem.
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16th May 2024 11:08am
16th May 2024 11:11am
Thank you, it's not my best work
But I'm clawing my way out of a creative slump.
Stress robs creativity.
But I'm clawing my way out of a creative slump.
Stress robs creativity.
16th May 2024 11:19am
16th May 2024 11:23am
16th May 2024 11:22am
Love this, girl.
Your haikus are so creative and I love how you grouped them to construct a poem.
And the pic? Delish. Works perfectly.
Your haikus are so creative and I love how you grouped them to construct a poem.
And the pic? Delish. Works perfectly.
16th May 2024 11:26am
Thanks, wishing I was in the pic, lol
Thank you so much, haiku's are all I can seem to write lately.
Thx for the love.
Thank you so much, haiku's are all I can seem to write lately.
Thx for the love.
16th May 2024 11:27am
16th May 2024 5:29pm
I usually don’t like vampires … but this is good.. I think you should challenge yourself to write other than haiku.. you have the talent … you just need a kick
16th May 2024 5:33pm
Hi! I do need a kick, a big one.
I just lost confidence in myself
I feel like it's gradually coming back
Thx for stopping bye and I'm glad you enjoyed.
I just lost confidence in myself
I feel like it's gradually coming back
Thx for stopping bye and I'm glad you enjoyed.
16th May 2024 8:42pm
16th May 2024 8:47pm
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17th May 2024 8:26am
A hot sexy vibe!!!
And pic!!!
And pic!!!
17th May 2024 8:39am
18th May 2024 3:02pm
18th May 2024 4:11pm
5th Jul 2024 5:27am
Very good theater, in keeping to the haiku format. Kind of depressing in that the insatiable desire was to drink blood from athirst, rather than seek romantic and pure relationship. I suppose this is dark, and that's cool. Good job!
6th Jul 2024 10:53am
I've always been fascinated by vampires, lol
If given the choice, I'll take the romance
Thx for checking out!
If given the choice, I'll take the romance
Thx for checking out!
