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Unravelling Under Command
I revel in the control
as I push you to the edge
testing your limits
and feeling the rush
of power
as you surrender
to the pleasures of pain
my hands leaving marks
as I spank and tease
feeling your body tremble
with every touch
and your moans
fill the air
a symphony of desire
as I push you
to the brink of orgasm
and watch you unravel
under my command
lost in the intoxicating
sensations of our game
leaving us both
breathless and craving
more of the torment
that unites us
in our shared deviance
my submissive little minx
be prepared
for next time
I'm gonna write
my name
all over your soul.....
as I push you to the edge
testing your limits
and feeling the rush
of power
as you surrender
to the pleasures of pain
my hands leaving marks
as I spank and tease
feeling your body tremble
with every touch
and your moans
fill the air
a symphony of desire
as I push you
to the brink of orgasm
and watch you unravel
under my command
lost in the intoxicating
sensations of our game
leaving us both
breathless and craving
more of the torment
that unites us
in our shared deviance
my submissive little minx
be prepared
for next time
I'm gonna write
my name
all over your soul.....
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