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Demure
Forever limbo I can't hold back
the fact that I am demure
living and dying in dreams
a hidden voice to scream
addicted to insomnia
of the monkey on my back
my mind a hurricane
with echoing drip of caffeine
the fact that I am demure
living and dying in dreams
a hidden voice to scream
addicted to insomnia
of the monkey on my back
my mind a hurricane
with echoing drip of caffeine
Published 15th May 2024
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15th May 2024 4:00pm
What a great write, one that resonates.
...and I say that as a fellow insomniac...
Also: caffeine ☕
...and I say that as a fellow insomniac...
Also: caffeine ☕
15th May 2024 4:04pm
I wasn't sure that it was Haiku, I am a self-prescribed insomniac because I stay up late at night and read.
17th May 2024 1:05am
I must say Adagio this really an excellent marriage of dark elements and erotic sensuality that expresses hint of romantic intent...I found the comparison between dreams and nightmares quite alluring and spine-tingling at the same time...excellent dark perspective my poetic friend...Blessings
17th May 2024 1:17am
