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Tell It Like It Is

Dare i stir your dormant waters  
Awaken a swirl of wordy trouble  
Dare i titillate your nervous bone  
While the funny bone is deadly stoned  
 
If you find me too abusive  
Say it, i would be much thankful  
If you find me even aggressive;  
I want a slap in my face to wake me up  
Or a counter-aggressiveness  
To make me feel how harsh i am..  
 
Send me you feedback, be arrogant  
With critical ranting, verbose spitting  
And slang insinuation,  
Use your torrid stark tongue  
Vomit that thing still stuck on your tongue's tip  
 
You want to feel relief from my own grief  
Here you are, this is me open, rave and destroy  
Say: " you are bad ", man  
I hate you, you are disgusting, but,  
 
Don't pour your anger on your pen  
On your tablet, on you I-phone, on your I-pad.......  
 
It really hurts me,  
But, actually it really cures me  
When you take heart, be bold, and scold me *  
And say it right in my face:  
Hence, you are a man, a poet, a human being,  
 
What being human if you do not show me my faults,  
My fails, my weak points..without which  
I will surely aim higher and higher into perfection..
 
I do not address any body, or aim to hurt any one
it's only a scribble from a tired pen..
Written by poeticdelight (Hamid)
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