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Tell It Like It Is
Dare i stir your dormant waters
Awaken a swirl of wordy trouble
Dare i titillate your nervous bone
While the funny bone is deadly stoned
If you find me too abusive
Say it, i would be much thankful
If you find me even aggressive;
I want a slap in my face to wake me up
Or a counter-aggressiveness
To make me feel how harsh i am..
Send me you feedback, be arrogant
With critical ranting, verbose spitting
And slang insinuation,
Use your torrid stark tongue
Vomit that thing still stuck on your tongue's tip
You want to feel relief from my own grief
Here you are, this is me open, rave and destroy
Say: " you are bad ", man
I hate you, you are disgusting, but,
Don't pour your anger on your pen
On your tablet, on you I-phone, on your I-pad.......
It really hurts me,
But, actually it really cures me
When you take heart, be bold, and scold me *
And say it right in my face:
Hence, you are a man, a poet, a human being,
What being human if you do not show me my faults,
My fails, my weak points..without which
I will surely aim higher and higher into perfection..
I do not address any body, or aim to hurt any one
it's only a scribble from a tired pen..
Awaken a swirl of wordy trouble
Dare i titillate your nervous bone
While the funny bone is deadly stoned
If you find me too abusive
Say it, i would be much thankful
If you find me even aggressive;
I want a slap in my face to wake me up
Or a counter-aggressiveness
To make me feel how harsh i am..
Send me you feedback, be arrogant
With critical ranting, verbose spitting
And slang insinuation,
Use your torrid stark tongue
Vomit that thing still stuck on your tongue's tip
You want to feel relief from my own grief
Here you are, this is me open, rave and destroy
Say: " you are bad ", man
I hate you, you are disgusting, but,
Don't pour your anger on your pen
On your tablet, on you I-phone, on your I-pad.......
It really hurts me,
But, actually it really cures me
When you take heart, be bold, and scold me *
And say it right in my face:
Hence, you are a man, a poet, a human being,
What being human if you do not show me my faults,
My fails, my weak points..without which
I will surely aim higher and higher into perfection..
I do not address any body, or aim to hurt any one
it's only a scribble from a tired pen..
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