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Talentless scribble
She said she
wanted something
sticky
and
hard
so I unzipped
offering
my candy cane
she sucked
and licked
until there was
nothing
left
who needs
to wait for
Christmas
to have
a good time
wanted something
sticky
and
hard
so I unzipped
offering
my candy cane
she sucked
and licked
until there was
nothing
left
who needs
to wait for
Christmas
to have
a good time
Author's Note
I have days when I wonder why I'm here. So I throw on crap.
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Re. Talentless scribble
Damn! She licked your dick off?
Fun little write here. Not everything has to be earth shattering or universe defining.
Fun little write here. Not everything has to be earth shattering or universe defining.
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Re. Talentless scribble
4th May 2024 10:59pm
This is a sex site
Enjoy it
Would you rather be in a confessional?
What's the problem ?
Enjoy it
Would you rather be in a confessional?
What's the problem ?
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4th May 2024 11:13pm
This is a sex site? Genuine question. I had no idea. I mean theres obviously erotica. Hard to miss but i didnt know that this was classified as a sex site.
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4th May 2024 11:37pm
I call it a sex site because people like to write sex and connect that way. It's anything you want it to be. Sometimes I call it a cesspool when it spins out too much. But there's no other site like it ...
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4th May 2024 11:38pm
That's fair. Haven't been here long but I like it. Glad I found this place. Wish I had looked for a poetry forum earlier but Im here now.
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4th May 2024 11:40pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th May 2024 11:58pm
4th May 2024 11:57pm
… meanwhile back on Earth, anybody else with half a brain is here for poetry. I mean imagine that. 😏
This is what’s wrong with the place in all balls to the wall honesty… Christ.
That steaming pile of happy horseshit aside…
Sometimes you have to pour out stuff just as it comes. Let it land how it comes.
When you clear out a pipe, you have to get the crap our first before the water runs, no? I feel that writing’s kinda the same.
Keep going. Rather something than nothing at all.
-M
This is what’s wrong with the place in all balls to the wall honesty… Christ.
That steaming pile of happy horseshit aside…
Sometimes you have to pour out stuff just as it comes. Let it land how it comes.
When you clear out a pipe, you have to get the crap our first before the water runs, no? I feel that writing’s kinda the same.
Keep going. Rather something than nothing at all.
-M
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5th May 2024 4:28am
Re. Talentless scribble
5th May 2024 3:50am
You're here the same as why we all are. And you belong.
Sometimes I try too hard to write something "huge" . I'm rarely satisfied with my results and tell myself to just stop. Sound familiar?
But, the camaraderie of writing amongst a good circle of like minds is therapeutic.
You belong.
Sometimes I try too hard to write something "huge" . I'm rarely satisfied with my results and tell myself to just stop. Sound familiar?
But, the camaraderie of writing amongst a good circle of like minds is therapeutic.
You belong.
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5th May 2024 3:52am
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she sucked
and licked
until there was
nothing
left
Sounds like you got a real sweet-toothed man-eater there!
and licked
until there was
nothing
left
Sounds like you got a real sweet-toothed man-eater there!
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5th May 2024 11:41am
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6th May 2024 5:52pm
Re. Talentless scribble
7th May 2024 3:31am
This was a fun and fresh minty write, you may call this talentless scribble but I'll tell you what, she's got chin dribble. Hehe, Idk... don't mind me I'm just being silly. All in all, it's not crap.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Talentless scribble
7th May 2024 3:32am
There's nothing wrong with being silly. I too get into its spell once in a while. :)
I thank you, L.
I thank you, L.
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