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The Missing Link
The tree and the bird
the bee and the flower
the sun and the moon
the heat and the shower
The silence and the sound
the ear and the music
the heart and the feeling
the brain and the thinking
The wild and the wise
The Human and Nature
the wild is inborn
the wise is artificial
From the wild comes the rule
Into the wise mind instilled
While the city is the filter
The rules then, are broken
Nature's facts disfigured
all the trees became timber
the animals taxidermized
and the lakes evaporated
The truth is sophisticated
the rules are self-created
away from the natural norm
and they say it is normal
So the wild will be created
by human's law manipulated
and the birds in the tree
will be mercilessly executed
And the tree will be alter
for their own brainless actions
for they don't see the bird
who sings only for the humans
Everything in life runs backwards
from the epilogue to the foreword
the story ends before it begins
the romance dies before it is born
Stop here ! make an in-depth account
just relax, judge the case's ins and outs
what is going wrong when we then fall?
Alas ! Nature is no longer the norm
-pleasz, listen to Aranjuez-
https://youtu.be/tt3CDO3rEeQ?t=6
the bee and the flower
the sun and the moon
the heat and the shower
The silence and the sound
the ear and the music
the heart and the feeling
the brain and the thinking
The wild and the wise
The Human and Nature
the wild is inborn
the wise is artificial
From the wild comes the rule
Into the wise mind instilled
While the city is the filter
The rules then, are broken
Nature's facts disfigured
all the trees became timber
the animals taxidermized
and the lakes evaporated
The truth is sophisticated
the rules are self-created
away from the natural norm
and they say it is normal
So the wild will be created
by human's law manipulated
and the birds in the tree
will be mercilessly executed
And the tree will be alter
for their own brainless actions
for they don't see the bird
who sings only for the humans
Everything in life runs backwards
from the epilogue to the foreword
the story ends before it begins
the romance dies before it is born
Stop here ! make an in-depth account
just relax, judge the case's ins and outs
what is going wrong when we then fall?
Alas ! Nature is no longer the norm
-pleasz, listen to Aranjuez-
https://youtu.be/tt3CDO3rEeQ?t=6
Published 30th Apr 2024
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30th Apr 2024 3:26pm
Really enjoyed this piece by you, I especially liked how you spoke of the wild versus the wild
It reminded me of somthing I read "the wild does not have words" We do not need to memorize the wild.
Humans think they are wise though they are not
Alas nature is not the norm anymore indeed. Have a lovely day
Rianne
Its really paradoxical when the true wild becomes wise, norm upon which we have to judge our actions, that lack tact,
wisdom truth and normality..
Nature is the basics, the key and the criteria. no more ado
wisdom truth and normality..
Nature is the basics, the key and the criteria. no more ado
30th Apr 2024 4:24pm
Nature will ever remain the norm..the root of all roots.. the epitome of Beauty.. the wild wise.. Human nature has to follow and walk its path and reach the missing link.. You just made my heart cry.. the depth of your poetry and the sensitivity of the music..
It is really sorrowful what happens today over the world,
Here they kill the children and there they program space conquest.???!!!!!
A world apart, devoid of any brain of any sentiment, this is Hell ''
Thank you my friend, your comment touches the strings of the heart,
But, who still keep a heart between their ribs, today???
Here they kill the children and there they program space conquest.???!!!!!
A world apart, devoid of any brain of any sentiment, this is Hell ''
Thank you my friend, your comment touches the strings of the heart,
But, who still keep a heart between their ribs, today???
30th Apr 2024 6:41pm
the heat and the shower? Hmm? The sun would be a better fit for the heat I think. Water would fit better but I realize the meter would be thrown off if used.
Man has been decimating forests and sent birds packing for so long. All in the name of profits and so-called progress. The earth suffers, the wildlife suffers. Someday we will see the damage in a way we didn't expect.
Man has been decimating forests and sent birds packing for so long. All in the name of profits and so-called progress. The earth suffers, the wildlife suffers. Someday we will see the damage in a way we didn't expect.
30th Apr 2024 6:54pm
One of my intrinsic flaws, ''i may say strong point' , is the blind use of the words that come to me uncontrolled, once i stop to ponder, the flow stops to write its steaming thoughts..
I consider the use of any word during the creation process an asset for the writer, as it shows his hidden thoughts, his way of thinking, his true personality, what could we do without Freud and Yung ....???
Thanks heaps my friend, your visit brightens my pages..Stay safe.
I consider the use of any word during the creation process an asset for the writer, as it shows his hidden thoughts, his way of thinking, his true personality, what could we do without Freud and Yung ....???
Thanks heaps my friend, your visit brightens my pages..Stay safe.
