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Condemned
hanging around
like a
condemnèd man
waiting on
that noose
under this
black hood
my heart
is thumping
tho i'm
hardly breathing
oh silence
take me
home
end all
the torture
of life
bury each
painful memory
just release
everything
please
no more
enough
has been
done here
time
to let
it go
like a
condemnèd man
waiting on
that noose
under this
black hood
my heart
is thumping
tho i'm
hardly breathing
oh silence
take me
home
end all
the torture
of life
bury each
painful memory
just release
everything
please
no more
enough
has been
done here
time
to let
it go
Published 30th Apr 2024
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final day
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total word count 53
unique word count 53
total word count 53
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30th Apr 2024 2:50pm
Congratulations on completing your FIFTH DU NAPO, AspergerPoet56! Your entries never fail to disappoint!
30th Apr 2024 3:34pm
1st May 2024 1:40am
Lol. You certainly would be 'hanging around' if you took the noose, lol. Very clever! But also very stark. I felt a little emotional reading about those fine margins between life & death, tbh.
1st May 2024 3:20am
been struggling really at end of last yr and beginning with 2 flirts at non life hence a lot of dark poetry being posted
1st May 2024 3:26am
You should be concentrating on 2 flirts with beautiful women like Billy would (after a few glasses of finest Malbec). We are poets remember, for fuck's sake? Meaning... our words can sometimes wooo. Woo hoo, right? As for flirts with non life, I'm glad you told me but... it's really not you nor me for that matter, buddy!
1st May 2024 3:32am
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1st May 2024 4:50am
didn't think I would make it this yr for obvious reasons but proud of myself
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