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Robin's Song
Quaint dawn robin's song.
The wrong in the heart lingers.
Tune of bliss uplifts.
The wrong in the heart lingers.
Tune of bliss uplifts.
Published 28th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Photo taken by my brother Thomas, a bird enthusiast.
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28th Apr 2024 11:25am
28th Apr 2024 11:31am
28th Apr 2024 11:38am
Nicely penned... I love hearing the robins when I walk my dog in the morning...
28th Apr 2024 11:49am
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28th Apr 2024 3:38pm
Thank you, I've been waiting to use that picture.
My brother also takes the most gorgeous pics of cardinals.
My brother also takes the most gorgeous pics of cardinals.
28th Apr 2024 4:05pm
Wow! Talent must run in your family. Your poem fit the pic perfectly! Kudos to the two of you!
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1st May 2024 3:53pm
I love birds. They really do uplift your mood when you feel down. Good job of transition in the various elements here. The last line is like an enduring momentum of happiness over sadness.
1st May 2024 4:50pm
Well I love that you love birds, lol. I think the bird chirping for me has that happy freedom
of childhood on a summer day. Birds don't worry, humans do, lol
Thx for checking out.
of childhood on a summer day. Birds don't worry, humans do, lol
Thx for checking out.
