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Disappearing Mountains

disappearing mountains
rain is falling down
on the hillside forests
here where I am found

waiting by a roadside
listening to the patter
of raindrops on the roof
a pitter patter chatter

of elemental messages
in the soothing sound
of water droplets crashing
above and on the ground

a liquid luscious moment
a water reverie
as rain keeps falling everywhere
on all that I can see

flowing in the gutters
dripping from the trees
splashing from the puddles
soaking all the leaves

teardrops from the ocean
saturate the ground
of disappearing mountains
here where I am found...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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