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Sex On Fire
i hear the sound
of a lighter really
smoke a ciggy?
just like that my
Pussy is on Fire
i scream out loud
and cross my legs
in a primal reflex
“what did i say?”
ehm i stammer
legs open wide
and don't make
a sound? “so?”
i brace myself
yet fail a slap in
my face follows
you can do this
just let go i close
my eyes capitulate
drift off into subspace
of a lighter really
smoke a ciggy?
just like that my
Pussy is on Fire
i scream out loud
and cross my legs
in a primal reflex
“what did i say?”
ehm i stammer
legs open wide
and don't make
a sound? “so?”
i brace myself
yet fail a slap in
my face follows
you can do this
just let go i close
my eyes capitulate
drift off into subspace
Written by
Duende
Published 25th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Originally written as prose.
Sex On Fire will never...
...sound the same to me.
https://youtu.be/RF0HhrwIwp0
Sex On Fire will never...
...sound the same to me.
https://youtu.be/RF0HhrwIwp0
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Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 2:14pm
Hoooooootnesssss. . . . . Not the most constructive comment I'll admit but damn girl! :)
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Re: Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 2:58pm
You made me smile, that's more important than constructiveness :-)
Hot as hell it was for sure, also literally. Thanks heaps for your comment.
Hot as hell it was for sure, also literally. Thanks heaps for your comment.
Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 2:15pm
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Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 3:17pm
I'v always wondered why do ladies cross their legs when on fire... a primal reflex?... don't know... probably more of "you have to work hard if you want to open those.." .... damn reading this has opened my ...
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Re: Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 4:18pm
Glad to hear it opened your... whatever ;-)
Thanks for the visit and leaving your thoughts.
Thanks for the visit and leaving your thoughts.
Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 3:36pm
I'm familiar with hot wax, but straight up fire...that's new to me! Damn, sis
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Re: Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 4:18pm
Smiles, you know I'm a tough cookie ;-)
Thanks heaps for the visit and comment, sis 💖
Thanks heaps for the visit and comment, sis 💖
Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 3:41pm
Hmmmm
Never tried straight up fire either…
Looks like I’ve got a list of things to try when I’m fully recovered ;)
Sexy write, D
Never tried straight up fire either…
Looks like I’ve got a list of things to try when I’m fully recovered ;)
Sexy write, D
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Re: Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 4:18pm
A little warning: it's terribly sensitive :-)
Thanks heaps for the read and comment.
Thanks heaps for the read and comment.
Re. Sex On Fire
25th Apr 2024 7:28pm
I am promised to another in the immortal realm already soul bonded... he's one of the sexiest men you've ever seen... remember true seduction begins with the intellect don't let anyone body shame you be who you really are.
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Re: Re. Sex On Fire
26th Apr 2024 5:00am
This isn't about intellect or body shaming, but I wish you good luck with your promised guy.