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Petals
Loves me.
Words spoken
by the sprinkling dust of the southern
sea
Loves me not.
Hearts broken
when he said he wanted to be
free
Loves me.
Futures planned
for as long as stars twinkled
above
Loves me not.
Hopes dashed
on the ancient alter of our stale
love
Loves me.
Still dreaming
he would hold me in his arms once
again
Loves me not.
Withering flower
I hold with thorns, tears, blood and
pain
Loves me
.
Loves me not
.
Loves me
.
Loves me…
Words spoken
by the sprinkling dust of the southern
sea
Loves me not.
Hearts broken
when he said he wanted to be
free
Loves me.
Futures planned
for as long as stars twinkled
above
Loves me not.
Hopes dashed
on the ancient alter of our stale
love
Loves me.
Still dreaming
he would hold me in his arms once
again
Loves me not.
Withering flower
I hold with thorns, tears, blood and
pain
Loves me
.
Loves me not
.
Loves me
.
Loves me…
Published 20th Apr 2024
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20th Apr 2024 8:02pm
20th Apr 2024 11:54pm
We Love and we break many hearts,?
But, why does the flower have to pay for our guess? and our heartbreaking
Isnt it wise to give the whole flower to those we Love?.
But, why does the flower have to pay for our guess? and our heartbreaking
Isnt it wise to give the whole flower to those we Love?.
20th Apr 2024 11:57pm
Well we need something to take it on to. So the poor flower is the only thing that has it in its heart to give us its whole being and let us up pull it apart for the sake of our guesses .. I guess
20th Apr 2024 10:44pm
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21st Apr 2024 00:01am
21st Apr 2024 8:30pm
So I take it that 'loves me' wins the day? Based on pure mathematics, nothing else. 😉
22nd Apr 2024 3:29am
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22nd Apr 2024 5:08am
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22nd Apr 2024 5:12am
You are just saying that so that I love you more … wait …I love you more… so you’re just say that …
22nd Apr 2024 3:03pm
The soft side of you is showing through. It's unique and beautifully expressed. Love the smooth flow and the tenderness shown in your words. Kudos, Sam.
