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Apollo!
Brilliant Luna shines tonight
Into our humble yard
with a heavenly golden light
I cannot disregard.
So lovely is that lunar gold
that I am by its force
compelled to think of thoughts untold
and of their utmost source!
And so my thoughts to craters go
and all their impact ways
of high albedo afterglow
seen from ejecta rays...
which tell us of the lunar past
and all the hits it took
from meteor and comet blast...
our naked eyes forsook!
Into our humble yard
with a heavenly golden light
I cannot disregard.
So lovely is that lunar gold
that I am by its force
compelled to think of thoughts untold
and of their utmost source!
And so my thoughts to craters go
and all their impact ways
of high albedo afterglow
seen from ejecta rays...
which tell us of the lunar past
and all the hits it took
from meteor and comet blast...
our naked eyes forsook!
Published 20th Apr 2024
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20th Apr 2024 7:09am
Dear MS,
You sure know how to make a girl swoon. I enjoyed this write and its homage to the moon. Simply divine.
H🌷
You sure know how to make a girl swoon. I enjoyed this write and its homage to the moon. Simply divine.
H🌷
20th Apr 2024 8:25am
20th Apr 2024 10:34am
20th Apr 2024 2:05pm
The elegance in this composition is the fine use of cosmic diction albedo, Apollo...but better is the hidden sense that is poetically supposed to be portrayed..
Luna has craters indeed..
Thanks for sharing
Luna has craters indeed..
Thanks for sharing
20th Apr 2024 3:10pm
The night sky is something very poetic, especially when the full moon
is hallowed with aura and the stars shine in the back ground
is hallowed with aura and the stars shine in the back ground
20th Apr 2024 3:26pm
Yes, i used to do that when too much younger and no troubles on my mind;
Now too much responsibilities that send me daily, and fast into bed before term........i long to those white nights with moon up high to watch..alas !!
I used to write sonnets a while ago, at Starlight Cafe and Poetry soup, but, then, i had to tend towards free verse and some understood forms just to rhyme, as i was told they dont care about forms, but only substance,
You are great in this Form MNS. i salute your patience
Now too much responsibilities that send me daily, and fast into bed before term........i long to those white nights with moon up high to watch..alas !!
I used to write sonnets a while ago, at Starlight Cafe and Poetry soup, but, then, i had to tend towards free verse and some understood forms just to rhyme, as i was told they dont care about forms, but only substance,
You are great in this Form MNS. i salute your patience
20th Apr 2024 3:55pm
21st Apr 2024 00:57am
You tell of Luna so strong and bold, MNS :) Beautiful heavenly nighttime light... you captured the essence of how humans feel when we gaze up!
21st Apr 2024 1:11am
Thanks!
Yes, it's hard to imagine how many generations of our species have co-existed with that marvelous glow!
It must be wired into our DNA by now!
Yes, it's hard to imagine how many generations of our species have co-existed with that marvelous glow!
It must be wired into our DNA by now!
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21st Apr 2024 5:07am
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