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I have always wanted to fly
To reach a height that only I could feel
To lay on soft pillowed clouds
To soar with external zeal
I have always wanted to climb.
The stairs of Kuramayama Kyoto
To reach the heavens here on earth
So, I soar to the heavens.
As I spread my wings
And you take me,
Without question
Or demands.
So, I can experience
The glory that is.
Within me.
To reach a height that only I could feel
To lay on soft pillowed clouds
To soar with external zeal
I have always wanted to climb.
The stairs of Kuramayama Kyoto
To reach the heavens here on earth
So, I soar to the heavens.
As I spread my wings
And you take me,
Without question
Or demands.
So, I can experience
The glory that is.
Within me.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 17th Apr 2024
Author's Note
I want to push myself in my poems so I pulled out 2 Karma Sutra cards and tried to see what I could write.
1 is sofa spread eagle
2 is Stairway to Heaven
Hopefully it makes sense. Fia
1 is sofa spread eagle
2 is Stairway to Heaven
Hopefully it makes sense. Fia
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Re: Re. I
17th Apr 2024 5:48pm
Re. I
17th Apr 2024 5:51pm
how many cards are still left?!... by the time you finish all we will all be in heaven or hell somewhere
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Re: Re. I
17th Apr 2024 6:57pm
Re. I
17th Apr 2024 6:27pm
I can see the inspiration of the cards from this set of lines
I have always wanted to climb.
The stairs of Kuramayama Kyoto
To reach the heavens here on earth
So, I soar to the heavens.
As I spread my wings [made me think of another kind of spreading]
I have always wanted to climb.
The stairs of Kuramayama Kyoto
To reach the heavens here on earth
So, I soar to the heavens.
As I spread my wings [made me think of another kind of spreading]
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17th Apr 2024 6:58pm
Re. I
19th Apr 2024 1:56pm
Wow. This is utterly beautiful and my favorite of yours so far. Simply beautiful piece.
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6th Aug 2024 3:01pm
Intriguing!
Wonderfully written..and now imagining so much of the Kama Sutra !!
Wonderfully written..and now imagining so much of the Kama Sutra !!
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