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Fiction
Eyes
inviting
as they conceal
a truth
in the story.
Lips
waiting
to be asked
just to tell
a lie.
inviting
as they conceal
a truth
in the story.
Lips
waiting
to be asked
just to tell
a lie.
Published 16th Apr 2024
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16th Apr 2024 5:06pm
honesty is beautiful but the truth sometimes is used to maim and scar...liar and heart beware... powerful write..
16th Apr 2024 8:27pm
16th Apr 2024 6:14pm
The eyes and the lips are the most communicative expressions there are to emotions.
Well done. :)
Well done. :)
16th Apr 2024 8:28pm
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19th Apr 2024 4:47am
Liar…. Not you… her … you are telling the truth about her eyes and lies… this is a great poem. Congrats
19th Apr 2024 5:12pm
