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Forever and More

Loan me forever
a kiss of autumn dew.  
Mist of the rainbow.  
adagio
Written by adagio
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Re. Forever and More
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
14th Apr 2024 4:39pm
Excellent, Adagio. The picture is mesmerizing!
faithmairee
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Re: Re. Forever and More
14th Apr 2024 4:40pm
Thank you kindly, my friend.
adagio
Re: Re. Forever and More
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
14th Apr 2024 4:41pm
My pleasure, my friend as always!
faithmairee
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Re. Forever and More
14th Apr 2024 4:42pm
Haiku makes one think.
adagio
Re. Forever and More
15th Apr 2024 2:50am
Dear A,

I enjoyed this write. You’ve painted a very pretty picture with your words. Lovely. H🌷
Honoria
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Re: Re. Forever and More
15th Apr 2024 3:09am
Thank you kindly.
adagio

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