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"Red Hot Fire"
Red hot fire
Ignites within me
As I stare
At sweaty butt-cheeks
Moving furiously
Making the bed squeak
And I see the freak
Underneath
Him
With her eyes closed
Moaning lustily
While looking blissfully
At peace...
So peacefully unaware
Young and just dumb
Just don't know
She and him
Aren't going
To be leaving
Through this door
Anymore
But first I must
Watch some of this...
Damn, I can honestly say
I'm going to miss
That way
He fucked me...
Look at him
Working it
Raising her legs up
Digging in it
Kind of wish
I could have never seen this
Man of mine
That dick that's suppose to be mine
Entering
Another woman's pussy
Damn it, why did this have to happen
To me?
And then
The Red Hot Fire
Consumes me...
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written by Tara A. aka LL 1-10-13
Ignites within me
As I stare
At sweaty butt-cheeks
Moving furiously
Making the bed squeak
And I see the freak
Underneath
Him
With her eyes closed
Moaning lustily
While looking blissfully
At peace...
So peacefully unaware
Young and just dumb
Just don't know
She and him
Aren't going
To be leaving
Through this door
Anymore
But first I must
Watch some of this...
Damn, I can honestly say
I'm going to miss
That way
He fucked me...
Look at him
Working it
Raising her legs up
Digging in it
Kind of wish
I could have never seen this
Man of mine
That dick that's suppose to be mine
Entering
Another woman's pussy
Damn it, why did this have to happen
To me?
And then
The Red Hot Fire
Consumes me...
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written by Tara A. aka LL 1-10-13
Published 5th May 2012
| Edited 10th Jan 2013
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5th May 2012 5:49am
.......Prince, "Scandalous"! Hoping as well that this is fiction or reflective from a distant past. LOL Lyrical One, I don't want you bustin' no caps in nobody! LMAO
A very saucy write!
A very saucy write!
6th May 2012 4:02pm
LOL!! ;) But this is fiction tho... And I Hope it never happens 2 me, becuz i prolly will snap... Just saying;) N e ways, im glad u enjoyed;)
5th May 2012 9:43am
Ifor us guys its the same knowing your pussy lusts 4 another dick.hot poem and lyrical
6th May 2012 4:04pm
5th May 2012 3:50pm
as i have always told my friends
that if my girl wants to give you some please dive in
but please do let me know
because i would put on a fabulous show
for the next time she desires my friend to get her wetter
to her surprise we will get it on together
& on that train ride she wont be coming back
because thats what she wanted so we will leave it like that....lol
that if my girl wants to give you some please dive in
but please do let me know
because i would put on a fabulous show
for the next time she desires my friend to get her wetter
to her surprise we will get it on together
& on that train ride she wont be coming back
because thats what she wanted so we will leave it like that....lol
6th May 2012 4:06pm
6th May 2012 7:00am
6th May 2012 4:08pm
15th May 2012 6:08am
I love this, I'm not much into sharing, especially my man, so if I were to find my man cheating on me, lord help them both. But I love the way you write, your work is amazing!!
16th May 2012 00:17am
Thank u;) I appreciate u taking ya time 2 check me out;) & 4 sharing your thoughts;) I don't know if it's amazing, but Wow, that's awesome u feel that, that makes me smile;)
11th Jan 2013 7:47pm
I read above that this is fiction. That this has not happened to you. That's good --because you deserve much, much better treatment.
So --what does that Red Hot Fire lead to? Violence? Revenge? Or, maybe, an adventure of your own.
So --what does that Red Hot Fire lead to? Violence? Revenge? Or, maybe, an adventure of your own.
14th Jan 2013 11:50pm
Oh I feel sorry 4 the man who cheats on me and I catch him, 'cuz that will b All She Wrote!! U kno?!
But ah, the Red Hot Fire will get u burnt & bleeding, baby, so--does that answer ya question?...;) lol ;)
But ah, the Red Hot Fire will get u burnt & bleeding, baby, so--does that answer ya question?...;) lol ;)
