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"Satisfied..."
Instinctively
I reach out
And grab hold of that dick
To put it in my mouth
You moan as my tongue licks
Around
Up and down
Side to side
Always going back to the tip
Can't help I like to flick it
Teasingly
I satisfy
Know it blows your mind
Know a mouth like mine
Is hard to find...
Gently
I be tugging on it
With my mouth
I'm all about
Trying to fit all of it
In there
Don't you know?
I'm trying to show
That I won't dare
Leave you unsatisfied...
And as I
Reach out
To grab hold of that dick
Know I'm going to lick it
Know I'm going to flick it
Going around
Up and down
Side to side
Always going back to the tip
And I will not quit
Until you're all the way satisfied...
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Written by Tara A. aka LL
I reach out
And grab hold of that dick
To put it in my mouth
You moan as my tongue licks
Around
Up and down
Side to side
Always going back to the tip
Can't help I like to flick it
Teasingly
I satisfy
Know it blows your mind
Know a mouth like mine
Is hard to find...
Gently
I be tugging on it
With my mouth
I'm all about
Trying to fit all of it
In there
Don't you know?
I'm trying to show
That I won't dare
Leave you unsatisfied...
And as I
Reach out
To grab hold of that dick
Know I'm going to lick it
Know I'm going to flick it
Going around
Up and down
Side to side
Always going back to the tip
And I will not quit
Until you're all the way satisfied...
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Written by Tara A. aka LL
Published 2nd May 2012
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2nd May 2012 11:22pm
Now this is truly the definition of motifs that are so delicious the repeat button is needed
2nd May 2012 11:26pm
Now thank u, man:) I appreciate u so much 4 taking the time 2 read and share your thoughts on it;) U always make me smile;)
2nd May 2012 11:24pm
.......and wondering does he ever play that Maxwell for U; you know the one-"Fortunate" cuz he got to be one fortunate brother. There's this movie y'all should watch together. It's an artistic rendering of everything you've said in this poem. It's called "The Art of Japanese Penis Honoring". Funny title, but a heavy movie. (bet neither of you can watch it to the end. if you ever want a copy, let me know ; )
As always, you're words are so damned "lyrical"
As always, you're words are so damned "lyrical"
2nd May 2012 11:37pm
U r soooo right about that and I'm just being honest, but he is fortunate;)
And um, yes that is a funny title;)...lol..;)and i sure will letcha know if i should want a copy;)
U r too sweet and i appreciate u much 4 reading and commenting;) Its always a pleasure;)
And um, yes that is a funny title;)...lol..;)and i sure will letcha know if i should want a copy;)
U r too sweet and i appreciate u much 4 reading and commenting;) Its always a pleasure;)
3rd May 2012 3:55am
Well i try 2 please as best as i can..;) & thanks 4 reading, its always appreciated;)
3rd May 2012 4:12am
I am loving all these poems that describe sex kn a way where I can viaualize it like a porno. Great description of a blowjob. Mann.
3rd May 2012 10:27pm
Well i am pleased 2 kno u loving it;) Thanks 4 reading and commenting, its much appreciated;)
3rd May 2012 9:04pm
Feel like i was just given a lesson...let u kno if i passed or failed later lol im jk...good stuff ma
3rd May 2012 10:30pm
22nd May 2012 6:59pm
Ayyee!!! Good read honey i read it like 3x lol. Great visual and great read. My type of shit. I knw u made some penis's hard after they read this lmao!
23rd May 2012 3:59pm
Thank u!! Im so glad u enjoyed!;) I appreciate ALL your words. U r 2 sweet & kind;)
23rd May 2012 9:33pm
there is a kind of worship, that's given to the lust,
that goes on right behind the door pulled closed with those we trust,
to take each other while exposed for only us to see,
and taste the hastened juices of the endless ecstasy...
I liked this...it had a good beat and can make you dance...great job...makes me wonder why I don't get around to adding part three to my little tale...the conclusion seemed like it should somehow be a beginning of sorts...
that goes on right behind the door pulled closed with those we trust,
to take each other while exposed for only us to see,
and taste the hastened juices of the endless ecstasy...
I liked this...it had a good beat and can make you dance...great job...makes me wonder why I don't get around to adding part three to my little tale...the conclusion seemed like it should somehow be a beginning of sorts...
24th May 2012 2:00am
24th May 2012 2:11am
24th May 2012 7:21pm
Man, i Love the way u put your words 2gether;) Its beautiful;) N e who, thanks 4 reading and 4 leaving that marvelously put comment;)
