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Sweet Nothings
I don't want your whispers,
Of sweet nothings in my ear.
I want...
To carve our love into your belly,
Carve a heart into your arm.
I don't want sweet nothings,
I want permanent reminders.
A symbol everlasting,
In which will never dim.
Those pleasantries shall disappear,
so why bother to sigh into my ear?
Of sweet nothings in my ear.
I want...
To carve our love into your belly,
Carve a heart into your arm.
I don't want sweet nothings,
I want permanent reminders.
A symbol everlasting,
In which will never dim.
Those pleasantries shall disappear,
so why bother to sigh into my ear?
Published 20th Feb 2010
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21st Feb 2010 12:13pm
excellent first lines, really captivating, drawing us into the seductive darkness of the rest of the poem. the longing to have something to claim as yours foverever~*
21st Feb 2010 3:21pm
Thank you for the wonderful comment. This actually came to me while participating in an "Anti-Valentines Day" challenge on dA. It's is one of my favorites. I'm glad you liked it. :)
