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The Unveiled
Close your eyes
And feel my lips
As they travel to
Your tender neck
Leaving a love bite
Here and there
My body feels
Hot and wild
As this symbolic
Unveiling persists
Your hands have held
My unblemished orbs
Your lips on my lips
Your tongue slips in-between
Like flowers in the
Midst of Spring
I welcome your kisses
My secrets revealed
And feel my lips
As they travel to
Your tender neck
Leaving a love bite
Here and there
My body feels
Hot and wild
As this symbolic
Unveiling persists
Your hands have held
My unblemished orbs
Your lips on my lips
Your tongue slips in-between
Like flowers in the
Midst of Spring
I welcome your kisses
My secrets revealed
Author's Note
Another glimpse of my gardens.
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10th Apr 2024 4:32pm
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10th Apr 2024 5:16pm
WOW! I'm spinning and never wanting it to stop. Thanks for unveiling. Hugs and love. O
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10th Apr 2024 7:04pm
Yes little flowers pushing up through the soil producing petals for a bee to enter and suckle from. Hahaha, you're a naughty one Lady, Tight
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10th Apr 2024 9:07pm
Perhaps just a little bit on my bad girl days when I'm thinking it might be worth it. Hahaha Good seeing you came by!
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11th Apr 2024 3:22am
This sensual, evocative poem is a captivating exploration of physical intimacy and the unveiling of secrets. your command of vivid, sensual imagery is truly remarkable, drawing the reader into a world of heightened sensation and vulnerability.
What I find most striking is the way the poem balances the physical and the emotional. This is a truly stunning piece of erotic poetry, one that elevates the physical to the realm of the transcendent.
What I find most striking is the way the poem balances the physical and the emotional. This is a truly stunning piece of erotic poetry, one that elevates the physical to the realm of the transcendent.
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