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Echo
it was certainly your fault
and even if it wasn't..it still was gonna be your fault
why i woke up so thick...my beast burdened
mood darkened..from a fuzzy dream
i am harkened.....{drugged} back to the
familiar days of...
pulses in overdrive...atmosphere electric
eyes glazed...senses blazing
losing grip on the moment...as cyclonic movement overtook time
my embrace craving the weight of your pressure
come now, love...
I'll accept responsibility but...
would this Aurae slip into your nightly reverie
calling up such nocturnal hauntings...
of those heavy undertows
with legs spread in full acceptance
of how i drove such a hard bargain..no quarter given
everything taken...selfishly...shamelessly
plump with arrogance and deeded entitlements
even in the midst of my fuckery
plunging deep into my oceanic welcome
where your turbulence stirred my Nereid hunger
need growing more urgent with the surge of your tide
your fist tight in my hair...pinning me...there
no...you left no room uninhabited...
your arrogant domination has always been my salvation
your sex and submission echoed in the sonar
of our poetic undertones
...steeled in ached reciprocity...heavenly compassion
stretching your dimensions over my veined circumference
balancing scales...measuring pain and pleasure
we hardcore fucked until we became
a stringed theory...
woven into a bond without binding
entangled...taut in suspended reality
wholly enthused...infused by the intensity
your aggression boldly harnessing my submission...
beginning another edition...your Oread spread on the swell of her mountain
reveling in your throb as you conquered my earth
opening a new chapter...thrusting ecstasy into verse
wake up, love...you see...I am wherever you have need
now let me soothe this ache
...until it burns
and even if it wasn't..it still was gonna be your fault
why i woke up so thick...my beast burdened
mood darkened..from a fuzzy dream
i am harkened.....{drugged} back to the
familiar days of...
pulses in overdrive...atmosphere electric
eyes glazed...senses blazing
losing grip on the moment...as cyclonic movement overtook time
my embrace craving the weight of your pressure
come now, love...
I'll accept responsibility but...
would this Aurae slip into your nightly reverie
calling up such nocturnal hauntings...
of those heavy undertows
with legs spread in full acceptance
of how i drove such a hard bargain..no quarter given
everything taken...selfishly...shamelessly
plump with arrogance and deeded entitlements
even in the midst of my fuckery
plunging deep into my oceanic welcome
where your turbulence stirred my Nereid hunger
need growing more urgent with the surge of your tide
your fist tight in my hair...pinning me...there
no...you left no room uninhabited...
your arrogant domination has always been my salvation
your sex and submission echoed in the sonar
of our poetic undertones
...steeled in ached reciprocity...heavenly compassion
stretching your dimensions over my veined circumference
balancing scales...measuring pain and pleasure
we hardcore fucked until we became
a stringed theory...
woven into a bond without binding
entangled...taut in suspended reality
wholly enthused...infused by the intensity
your aggression boldly harnessing my submission...
beginning another edition...your Oread spread on the swell of her mountain
reveling in your throb as you conquered my earth
opening a new chapter...thrusting ecstasy into verse
wake up, love...you see...I am wherever you have need
now let me soothe this ache
...until it burns
Published 6th Apr 2024
| Edited 8th Apr 2024
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6th Apr 2024 8:40am
That was one hell of a read. Image is crazy cool.
Your description was exquisite, an odyssey.
Phenomenal writing!
Your description was exquisite, an odyssey.
Phenomenal writing!
6th Apr 2024 1:43pm
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, Debbie.
Your energy is so appreciated.!!
Your energy is so appreciated.!!
6th Apr 2024 1:58pm
6th Apr 2024 2:38pm
8th Apr 2024 2:56am
I'm glad you enjoyed the journey, dear Sis
Always a pleasure when you drop in
Always a pleasure when you drop in
6th Apr 2024 10:05pm
8th Apr 2024 2:58am
11th Apr 2024 3:22am
God damn!
This is thick with the wow factor. I'm kinda at odds what to say. Lol.
Let's go with incredible. Educated and enticing.
It's a very well done write. And we are fortunate to be readers of it.
This is thick with the wow factor. I'm kinda at odds what to say. Lol.
Let's go with incredible. Educated and enticing.
It's a very well done write. And we are fortunate to be readers of it.
12th Apr 2024 11:46am
Thank you o much for, Styxian
Your energy brought such a huge smile to my face!!
Your energy brought such a huge smile to my face!!
7th May 2024 5:29am
Solid poem. I thoroughly enjoyed that last stanza, I loved the closing lines.
LJ
LJ
