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Isn't it funny how three words would illicit intense emotions?

I Love you
You feel it in your chest
You feel warmth
You feel a glow

I Want you
You feel it lower
You feel heat
You feel an intense desire.

I Hate you
You feel it everywhere
Like a whip
It aches

All this from a shot of Dark Rum
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