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Isn't it funny how three words would illicit intense emotions?
I Love you
You feel it in your chest
You feel warmth
You feel a glow
I Want you
You feel it lower
You feel heat
You feel an intense desire.
I Hate you
You feel it everywhere
Like a whip
It aches
All this from a shot of Dark Rum
I Love you
You feel it in your chest
You feel warmth
You feel a glow
I Want you
You feel it lower
You feel heat
You feel an intense desire.
I Hate you
You feel it everywhere
Like a whip
It aches
All this from a shot of Dark Rum
Published 6th Apr 2024
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First entry into the competition.
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6th Apr 2024 1:45am
How the hell are we going to compete in this competition if you post things like that?
6th Apr 2024 1:46am
Anonymous
6th Apr 2024 2:57am
So true, three words can create many emotions within !
That last stanza is powerful.
Good luck in the competition.
That last stanza is powerful.
Good luck in the competition.
6th Apr 2024 2:59am
This is very good! All this from a shot of rum. I should drink more often! Lol, no, I really shouldn't! 🤣
6th Apr 2024 10:15pm
6th Apr 2024 10:23pm
Would a shot of dark Rum causes one to desire to C...M? (Smile). Hugs and love, Oral
6th Apr 2024 10:47pm
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