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casino musings
nipples and toes
nipples and toes
face up on the roulette
round and round she goes
pencil dick dreams
pencil dick dreams
with each revolution
nose slaps his ding-a-ling
up on all fours
up on all fours
riverboat paddles
have her panting for more
ass cheeks aglow
ass cheeks aglow
all bets are placed
nipples or toes
nipples and toes
face up on the roulette
round and round she goes
pencil dick dreams
pencil dick dreams
with each revolution
nose slaps his ding-a-ling
up on all fours
up on all fours
riverboat paddles
have her panting for more
ass cheeks aglow
ass cheeks aglow
all bets are placed
nipples or toes
Published 1st Apr 2024
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1st Apr 2024 7:46am
Had me imagining being in the casino with the gambling session possibly turning into an orgy. The dresses women wear at high class casinos (a la James Bond movies) are often of styles that emphasise nipples and toes.
2nd Apr 2024 6:29am
Thank you for the read and glad I could lean into the imagination. Those places are really good for ‘people’ watching.
24th Jun 2024 1:45pm
Ok that was funny. The thought of a chick as the pointer on a roulette wheel was really creative, and you did it in a fun way.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the advancement of the theme in each stanza.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the advancement of the theme in each stanza.
24th Jun 2024 8:28pm
Betty,
Thanks for the read and enjoying the poking of fun that was injected. Always happy when I can advance my theme.
down2dirt
Thanks for the read and enjoying the poking of fun that was injected. Always happy when I can advance my theme.
down2dirt
