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I Hope You Can See Me Now

I have comfort

In the fact

That you are looking

At the same cotton candy sky

I am


isn’t that so strangely beautiful?

You are in heaven
And I on earth

Yet we still view the same sky
Written by moony_
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Author's Note
At first, this poem was going to be a love “ we are apart yet we still look at the same sky” etc. but then I started writing and it turned into something about all of the people and animals in my life that have passed these past years. I hope they can see how well I’m doing now and how much I miss them.
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