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Triple Twenty
No-one knew
Or possibly didn't care
Or wonder
Why this particular dragonfly
Had no tail, or much body
And that's why
It had no control
On how it could fly
Oft seen
Crashing into trees, hedges,
And other dragonflies
Who often mistook this dragonfly
As a helicopter seed
As it crashed chaotically to the ground
This was not good for the dragonflies' morale
He soon took to wearing
A false torso
Which kind of gave him better balance
And in time
Was able to fly again
Although he came to a tragic end
When mistaken for a dart
And died imbedded on a dartboard
Scoring a triple twenty in the process
by Jemia
Or possibly didn't care
Or wonder
Why this particular dragonfly
Had no tail, or much body
And that's why
It had no control
On how it could fly
Oft seen
Crashing into trees, hedges,
And other dragonflies
Who often mistook this dragonfly
As a helicopter seed
As it crashed chaotically to the ground
This was not good for the dragonflies' morale
He soon took to wearing
A false torso
Which kind of gave him better balance
And in time
Was able to fly again
Although he came to a tragic end
When mistaken for a dart
And died imbedded on a dartboard
Scoring a triple twenty in the process
by Jemia
Published 28th Mar 2024
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29th Mar 2024 12:32pm
This poem captures a whimsical and slightly melancholic narrative, blending elements of nature with a touch of humor and tragedy. The imagery of the dragonfly struggling with its identity and physical limitations, only to meet its demise in a tragic case of mistaken identity, is both poignant and thought-provoking. The use of metaphor, particularly likening the dragonfly to a helicopter seed and later to a dart, adds depth to the theme of misperception and the consequences it can have. Overall, it's a creative and engaging piece that invites reflection on the complexities of perception and the sometimes unexpected paths life can take.
