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Rich with Thoughts
You claim that your submissions here
Are “ rich with thoughts”.
That is to say that they are filled
with scores
of subject differentiated products of your mind.
But what I find
when reading what you send
to DUP Is that
the number of the individuated
mental ruminations set
within their "stanzaed" frames
are limited to two or three at most.
and, more, that these
in substance and in topic are
not varied but
repeatedly the same.
One wonders then
If your assessment of what populates
your poetry
Is true
Or is to be
regarded as a braggart’s boast.
Are “ rich with thoughts”.
That is to say that they are filled
with scores
of subject differentiated products of your mind.
But what I find
when reading what you send
to DUP Is that
the number of the individuated
mental ruminations set
within their "stanzaed" frames
are limited to two or three at most.
and, more, that these
in substance and in topic are
not varied but
repeatedly the same.
One wonders then
If your assessment of what populates
your poetry
Is true
Or is to be
regarded as a braggart’s boast.
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