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LITTLE DROPS
How is it that you
sparkle so
little dewdrop
I admire your timely beauty.
As the sunlight shines through
you know
little dewdrop
I admire your precious glimmer.
How that light is truth
the soul
little dewdrop
Please guide me.
And what an enticing view
at soles
little dewdrop
Please don't go.
And resting on lashes blue
you go
little teardrop
Please don't leave me.
Please please don't leave my view
eye holes
little teardrop
I see you fading away.
You'll fall onto grass and become dew
shine so
little teardrop
It hurts.
I'll push you askew
vital role
little blood-drop
I'm trying to be more shallow.
Another lovely moment changes hues
black hole
little blood-drop
I'm trying to fade away too.
I'm on raw knees asking you
for parole
little blood-drop
I'd now rather bleed than stay with you.
Crying scorching tears of dew
blood toll
little ___ ___
Published 21st Mar 2024
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21st Mar 2024 7:39pm
So fragile, with such beauty in your wording and phrasing. A poem that isn't afraid to show your vulnerability. Nicely done.
21st Mar 2024 10:23pm
21st Mar 2024 10:45pm
I like how raw you are with this poem, it really allows me to feel what the person in the poem is feeling.
21st Mar 2024 11:33pm
22nd Mar 2024 2:47am
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22nd Mar 2024 8:30pm
Truth to power...the evolution to yes and reality---keeping it real. Hugs and love, Oral
22nd Mar 2024 8:30pm
Truth to power...the evolution to yes and reality---keeping it real. Hugs and love, Oral
22nd Mar 2024 9:20pm
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