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LOVE THE WAY IT SWINGS
HANGING
clearly in view
right before my eyes;
decked in satin and silk,;
ready to receive anyone
who desires the fun
and relaxation...I look
closely at it, even push
it a little...I am enticed
by the way it swings,
so I take a seat in
the new yard swing of
my neighbor.
YES,
I love the way it swings:
back and forth; fast and slow.
There's room if you care
to join me swinging.
clearly in view
right before my eyes;
decked in satin and silk,;
ready to receive anyone
who desires the fun
and relaxation...I look
closely at it, even push
it a little...I am enticed
by the way it swings,
so I take a seat in
the new yard swing of
my neighbor.
YES,
I love the way it swings:
back and forth; fast and slow.
There's room if you care
to join me swinging.
Published 21st Mar 2024
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21st Mar 2024 9:47am
I should know by now.
I start smiling, dare I say get a little excited, and then…
There it is, your cleverness.
Have a great day, Oral.
I start smiling, dare I say get a little excited, and then…
There it is, your cleverness.
Have a great day, Oral.
21st Mar 2024 12:54pm
21st Mar 2024 1:06pm
21st Mar 2024 1:12pm
I always want to swing high.
The longer the pendulum the higher it goes but without the slack bit if it is too long.
The slack bit that gives you the thrill
R
The longer the pendulum the higher it goes but without the slack bit if it is too long.
The slack bit that gives you the thrill
R
21st Mar 2024 2:48pm
YES! The slack and back UP. Thanks for your creative comment. Hugs and love,Oral
