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Open Your Eyes And Look At Your Birthday Present
"Open your eyes and
look at your birthday present"
was what Zach heard one
person say before he saw
Tabitha standing naked.
look at your birthday present"
was what Zach heard one
person say before he saw
Tabitha standing naked.
Published 20th Mar 2024
Author's Note
The title of this tanka poem happens to be what one person says before a friend opens both eyes for a look.
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20th Mar 2024 6:48pm
interesting picture she looks to feminine to be a man to masculine to be woman much like myself so I wonder what kind of punishment the duality is...
20th Mar 2024 7:49pm
