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destination (too far)
clustering
of lights
sharpening
themselves
over me,
shadows
behind me,
my eyes
so heavy,
i still
drove,
how i
wished
to sleep,
this moment
sweeping me
over
and over,
my destination
still lay
too far.
of lights
sharpening
themselves
over me,
shadows
behind me,
my eyes
so heavy,
i still
drove,
how i
wished
to sleep,
this moment
sweeping me
over
and over,
my destination
still lay
too far.
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Re. destination (too far)
16th Mar 2024 3:26am
Miles to go before you sleep.
I like how you describe a long drive on the highway. I've fallen asleep behind the wheel- just missed crashing into the side of a mountain. No fun.
I like how you describe a long drive on the highway. I've fallen asleep behind the wheel- just missed crashing into the side of a mountain. No fun.
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