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Obeying & Violating

God told me to murder my teacher, I did
God told me to murder my priest, I did
God told me to murder my parents, I did
God told me to avoid prison, I did
God told me to commit suicide, I did
I think in my next life I'll worship Satan

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 9th Mar 2024

#devil #God #MentalHealth #murder

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Re. Obeying & Violating

Thor_Azine

9th Mar 2024 1:27pm

Wow, it's sort of stunning and oddly beautiful in its simplicity yet paradoxically complex. Extremely interesting and thought provoking poem.

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Vision_of_insanity

9th Mar 2024 3:34pm

Thank you sir. I came up with the idea when you hear people committing these heinous acts. Then these radical/lunatics will say god said this to me, god said that.
I threw the twist in regarding Satan.
Glad you liked it.