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An Erotic Scene
The man’s gaze was like the sunrise, an epiphany shimmering in his eyes. Lauryn looked over his chest, a horizon stretching infinitely, luring her into uncharted realms.
There! She caught sight of the object of her longing. She felt the rise and fall of his breath. She watched transfixed as he became fully formed. His cock waited in the still half-light for any kindness the universe might offer.
Her thoughts went back to childhood and the kisses she’d stolen in the prayer garden while skipping service. Hadn’t God blessed her curiosity or at the very least, blessed the young boy who pursued her. Wasn’t tonight just another chapter in that exploration?
It was as if the heavens were opening, inviting her to a celestial dance reserved only for those who are enslaved by their hearts. She felt as if the whole universe saw the purity of her desire and granted its silent approval.
Her thoughts drifted back again to that first kiss and how sweet that boy’s lips had been. When they’d kissed, her eyes were inches from his and she kept them open to see his closeness. Since those garden kisses she’d tended to be an open-eyed kisser.
Now with this man, her eyes were open as an invisible force drew her forward until her lips found their home. She paused to let his warmth fill her mouth. Two inches from her opened eyes, the blur of his pubic hairs tickled the tip of her nose. She might have laughed but for the fullness of her mouth. He felt foreign but perfectly right.
As she performed her magic, his musician hands found their place and gently massaged her crown, wooing her heart with notes of tenderness she’d never imagined. She instinctively let him slide in and out of her mouth while she looked clear-eyed at his shining. Her head bobbed smoothly, willingly, with a gentle urgency, forward and back as she savored the salty taste of him.
In the moments of his coming, she wanted only to be one with the boy in the prayer garden now embodied by this man. She felt in him a cosmic force, beckoning her to merge with something beyond physical existence. She swallowed him easily, almost thirstily.
There! She caught sight of the object of her longing. She felt the rise and fall of his breath. She watched transfixed as he became fully formed. His cock waited in the still half-light for any kindness the universe might offer.
Her thoughts went back to childhood and the kisses she’d stolen in the prayer garden while skipping service. Hadn’t God blessed her curiosity or at the very least, blessed the young boy who pursued her. Wasn’t tonight just another chapter in that exploration?
It was as if the heavens were opening, inviting her to a celestial dance reserved only for those who are enslaved by their hearts. She felt as if the whole universe saw the purity of her desire and granted its silent approval.
Her thoughts drifted back again to that first kiss and how sweet that boy’s lips had been. When they’d kissed, her eyes were inches from his and she kept them open to see his closeness. Since those garden kisses she’d tended to be an open-eyed kisser.
Now with this man, her eyes were open as an invisible force drew her forward until her lips found their home. She paused to let his warmth fill her mouth. Two inches from her opened eyes, the blur of his pubic hairs tickled the tip of her nose. She might have laughed but for the fullness of her mouth. He felt foreign but perfectly right.
As she performed her magic, his musician hands found their place and gently massaged her crown, wooing her heart with notes of tenderness she’d never imagined. She instinctively let him slide in and out of her mouth while she looked clear-eyed at his shining. Her head bobbed smoothly, willingly, with a gentle urgency, forward and back as she savored the salty taste of him.
In the moments of his coming, she wanted only to be one with the boy in the prayer garden now embodied by this man. She felt in him a cosmic force, beckoning her to merge with something beyond physical existence. She swallowed him easily, almost thirstily.
Published 9th Mar 2024
| Edited 18th Mar 2024
Author's Note
While sketching a possible scene for my book, I wrote this erotic passage and thought I'd share it.
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