"Satisfied..."

Now this is truly the definition of motifs that are so delicious the repeat button is needed

Now thank u, man:) I appreciate u so much 4 taking the time 2 read and share your thoughts on it;) U always make me smile;)

.......and wondering does he ever play that Maxwell for U; you know the one-"Fortunate" cuz he got to be one fortunate brother.  There's this movie y'all should watch together.  It's an artistic rendering of everything you've said in this poem.  It's called "The Art of Japanese Penis Honoring".  Funny title, but a heavy movie. (bet neither of you can watch it to the end.  if you ever want a copy, let me know ; )


As always, you're words are so damned "lyrical"

U r soooo right about that and I'm just being honest, but he is fortunate;)

And um, yes that is a funny title;)...lol..;)and i sure will letcha know if i should want a copy;)

U r too sweet and i appreciate u much 4 reading and commenting;) Its always a  pleasure;)

Well  the  action  u  did  makes  the  guy  to  get  full  satisfaction

Well i try 2 please as best as i can..;) & thanks 4 reading, its always appreciated;)

I am loving all these poems that describe sex kn a way where I can viaualize it like a porno. Great description of a blowjob. Mann.

Well i am pleased 2 kno u loving it;) Thanks 4 reading and commenting, its much appreciated;)

Feel like i was just given a lesson...let u kno if i passed or failed later lol im jk...good stuff ma

;) lol! Thank u 4 reading, & 4 your kind words;)

Ayyee!!! Good read honey i read it like 3x lol. Great visual and great read. My type of shit. I knw u made some penis's hard after they read this lmao!

Thank u!! Im so glad u enjoyed!;) I appreciate ALL your words. U r 2 sweet & kind;)

there is a kind of worship, that's given to the lust,
that goes on right behind the door pulled closed  with those we trust,
to take each other while exposed for only us to see,
and taste the hastened juices of the endless ecstasy...

I liked this...it had a good beat and can make you dance...great job...makes me wonder why I don't get around to adding part three to my little tale...the conclusion seemed like it should somehow be a beginning of sorts...

Yeh why dont ya rank amateur;;let us ladies see whta ya got k?

U r a jerk

Man, i Love the way u put your words 2gether;) Its beautiful;) N e who, thanks 4 reading and 4 leaving that marvelously put comment;)