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Uncondtional Love
it is beautiful what you do...
loving me unconditionally
you make me forget
that is your greatest kindness to me
forget that I'm a tyrant
a spoiled child
throwing a tantrum
I think to myself this is wisdom while learning life's lessons
then when a nerve is hit
I lose my shit
letting cruelty drip from my tongue
it hurts when the tide goes out
because it washes back in again
and my soul is left drowning in regret
not for any one person
but for your children
your instruments
Father what are you doing here
proving your case to me face-to-face
I suppose you could have set me adrift the day I was born, utterly alone
I am amazed you still love me
you correct me
you're the only one who can reason with me
no one else knows my language
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Re. Uncondtional Love
Hello Crimson, I like this one... It is a primal rage technique that I am a huge fan of... Are you Sagittarius also... You written this beautifully, it could be a part of a book: wolf
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4th Mar 2024 3:04pm
good morning dearest Wolf yes I am a Sagittarius...thank you most graciously I am unsure where my rage comes from it rises from deep inside me from time to time...I appreciate the thoughtful comment 💕
Re. Uncondtional Love
4th Mar 2024 6:06am
Good words and used well
I would just say that words said you regret can be taken back and forgiven but only quickly or they are history which cannot be changed if more tham a day or two passes by.
Richard
I would just say that words said you regret can be taken back and forgiven but only quickly or they are history which cannot be changed if more tham a day or two passes by.
Richard
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4th Mar 2024 3:07pm
in this case I don't regret what I said so much as the anger behind it...sometimes I can be cruel with my mouth...when it isn't needed to get a point across I apologized the next morning because once my anger started flowing that was how long it took to get back in check... thank you for reading and leaving a wise comment 💕
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4th Mar 2024 8:20pm
Yes i absolutely agree. The anger takes a while to dissipate I know from experience with a previous partner. Our turmoils could take a week to be resolved and each time saw our togetherness fail bit by bit and I did not realise that was happening to me.
I still love her even though I have been married again but we remain in touch
Richard
I still love her even though I have been married again but we remain in touch
Richard
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4th Mar 2024 10:44pm
thank you for sharing your own personal experiences I'm happy you both remained friends anger is usually over insecurities, fear, hurt and a lot of misunderstandings...I try not to let it get the best of me but sometimes I lose 💕
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4th Mar 2024 3:38pm
BRAVO! Wish the world knew, believed, and practiced this truth. Hugs and love, Oral
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4th Mar 2024 10:44pm
hello dearest Oral thank you graciously my friend I hope yo are having a good day today 💕
Re. Uncondtional Love
5th Mar 2024 11:45am
In the end it's the only true love that exists, unconditionally.
Just a complete poem here with emotional content and vibrant visuals.
Beautiful.
Just a complete poem here with emotional content and vibrant visuals.
Beautiful.
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5th Mar 2024 4:02pm
thank you dearest Thor for a very thoughtful comment...it is you're right the other isn't love and everyone deserves this kind of love 💕
Re. Uncondtional Love
9th Mar 2024 7:24pm
It is baffling to feel unconditional love even when we sometimes falter and go back to our core foundations in faith and creed.
Nice work crim.
Nice work crim.
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