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Mountain Sunrise
There was a peaceful way the soft rays
of dawn's infant light.
Lay beside the enigmatic shadows
of the silent mountainside.
The sight melted every care away,
lasting a multitude of sweet moments
within my day.
The lovely ambient orange glow.
Softens the shape of the days
I don't yet know.
Paralysis of pain.
The strong mountain,
whispers my name.
Conditions of pleasure
exist at the summit of my brain.
of dawn's infant light.
Lay beside the enigmatic shadows
of the silent mountainside.
The sight melted every care away,
lasting a multitude of sweet moments
within my day.
The lovely ambient orange glow.
Softens the shape of the days
I don't yet know.
Paralysis of pain.
The strong mountain,
whispers my name.
Conditions of pleasure
exist at the summit of my brain.
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Re. Mountain Sunrise
3rd Mar 2024 10:37am
I melted into this. The serenity and peace found here is palpable. I’m happy you had this moment, my friend.
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3rd Mar 2024 10:41am
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3rd Mar 2024 11:49am
The image & the words are perfect. The creation you created here deserves a two thumbs up & an addition to my reading list. Fantastic Debbie.
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3rd Mar 2024 12:05pm
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3rd Mar 2024 8:29pm
Welcoming language used in depiction. Very visual and peaceful indeed. Has a neat and clean feel to it as well. Reading it almost washes away anxiety, and comforts with eloquent vibrance. A sort of purity in emanation. The way you relate aspects of your observation to emotion is quite expressive. The transition at the end makes this seem like a passage that could lead into the telling of a story or adventure, heh. It is quite the journey to embark upon to find happiness that lasts. Still, silent moments like this always help, ha-ha. This was a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. I'll see you around - take care!
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Re. Mountain Sunrise
3rd Mar 2024 9:41pm
Aww. Thank you so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It brings me great peace to write of peace.
I see all of nature in poetry. Lol When I have something to look at and describe, it comes with a great ease.
So I'm very visual, and emotional, lol. I can't paint or draw though. It just makes me happy my words
are like a conduit to make others feel the peace too.
Take care too! And I appreciate all your feedback and support.
I see all of nature in poetry. Lol When I have something to look at and describe, it comes with a great ease.
So I'm very visual, and emotional, lol. I can't paint or draw though. It just makes me happy my words
are like a conduit to make others feel the peace too.
Take care too! And I appreciate all your feedback and support.
Re. Mountain Sunrise
All my life have been so close to mountains, read their mystic silence; scan their rigid appearance;
and asked about their hidden riddles. they gave me wisdom and firmness and patience, mysticism and obedience and more than this, they gave me Poetry..
Thanks for sharing your outstanding picturesque description of such a natural beauty..
God bless
and asked about their hidden riddles. they gave me wisdom and firmness and patience, mysticism and obedience and more than this, they gave me Poetry..
Thanks for sharing your outstanding picturesque description of such a natural beauty..
God bless
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4th Mar 2024 12:52pm
Thank you, I unfortunately do not live within a mountain view.
But my sister lives in Alaska, I thought I died and went to heaven
when I saw those snow capped mountains.
Mountains will forever call for my return.
I'm so happy the mountains bring you so much peace, thanks for sharing
But my sister lives in Alaska, I thought I died and went to heaven
when I saw those snow capped mountains.
Mountains will forever call for my return.
I'm so happy the mountains bring you so much peace, thanks for sharing
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4th Mar 2024 12:55pm
The Mountains are not dead stones, they breathe and grow, but too
much slow that we cant notice them....
Than You for your response. God bless....
much slow that we cant notice them....
Than You for your response. God bless....
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4th Mar 2024 1:43pm
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2024 7:23pm
This is like a deep inhalation after being underground too long.
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4th Mar 2024 8:40pm