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Continents of Snow
Stray continents of snow,
struggle to survive,
upon a heartless grass.
Swollen sun threatening to vanish
the remaining of the land's white stash.
While fragile tulips and hyacinth emerge unabashed.
March is born from a winter world
where life was torn.
The seasons of life persist.
A descending warmth & light
our hibernating hearts cannot resist.
Cold brutalities of our life
serve as a chance to fiercely thrive.
struggle to survive,
upon a heartless grass.
Swollen sun threatening to vanish
the remaining of the land's white stash.
While fragile tulips and hyacinth emerge unabashed.
March is born from a winter world
where life was torn.
The seasons of life persist.
A descending warmth & light
our hibernating hearts cannot resist.
Cold brutalities of our life
serve as a chance to fiercely thrive.
Author's Note
To my forever friend and HER quest to thrive.
Love ya
Love ya
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Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 10:15am
Uplifting , strong energy induced through each word, sincerely evoked..
Snow is a fresh begining in my humble opinion.
Snow is a fresh begining in my humble opinion.
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Re: Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 10:28am
Hi! I'm glad that was how you perceived it, because it came
straight from my heart. I always like to look at snow as a blank slate.
Thanks so much for your kind comments
straight from my heart. I always like to look at snow as a blank slate.
Thanks so much for your kind comments
Re: Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 10:29am
that's right, snow is a pure spirit, an innocent mind and heart..
thanks Debbie .much appreciated
thanks Debbie .much appreciated
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Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 11:14am
Girl, you overwhelm me with your support and encouragement. THANK YOU. I’m so grateful to know you and to have your friendship💕
So many people here lift me up when I falter. I have so much to be thankful for.
Other than that I’m speechless and if I had makeup on it would be all over my face as usual, lol. I love you, girl.
So many people here lift me up when I falter. I have so much to be thankful for.
Other than that I’m speechless and if I had makeup on it would be all over my face as usual, lol. I love you, girl.
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Re: Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 11:35am
Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 11:23am
A beautiful & atmospheric piece of poetry. Were now entering March and the next chapter awaits.
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Re: Re. Continents of Snow
1st Mar 2024 11:36am
Hey! That's right, the next chapter does await!
Thank you for your nice comments
Thank you for your nice comments
Re. Continents of Snow
3rd Mar 2024 3:06am
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3rd Mar 2024 8:09am
Thank you, that means so much to me.
I'm very visual with nature, I literally saw two little mounds of snow
on my grass and right away my mind will ask - what does that look like -
Continents of snow!!!
I'm happiest when I write of nature/ the elements
I'm very visual with nature, I literally saw two little mounds of snow
on my grass and right away my mind will ask - what does that look like -
Continents of snow!!!
I'm happiest when I write of nature/ the elements
Re. Continents of Snow
Anonymous
4th Mar 2024 7:20pm
The way you merge positive energy & moments into a dark tapestry, giving winter it's respect & spring it's glory is amazing

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4th Mar 2024 8:42pm
Re. Continents of Snow
5th Mar 2024 2:28am
Dear D,
Lovely piece. I thoroughly enjoyed this and while you had me at snow I loved your authors note as well. H🌷
Lovely piece. I thoroughly enjoyed this and while you had me at snow I loved your authors note as well. H🌷
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Re: Re. Continents of Snow
5th Mar 2024 7:51am
Thank you so much for stopping bye.
A friend inspired me to finish this poem, I was struggling with.
Here's to thriving!
A friend inspired me to finish this poem, I was struggling with.
Here's to thriving!