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Empty Spaces
we all have empty spaces
some are in our lives
others in our hearts
even in depths of our souls
have no answers for anything
just know what I believe
gets me thru the day
been thru many things just like you
although we live different lives
been many different places
we are close in some ways
some of our pain is the same
friendships come and go
have lost some along my journey
also have gained some
some we are only to share for a while
luvers have come and gone as well
we have seen pain there too
wounds seem to never heal
scars remind us that they do
© 2024 Flowergirl
some are in our lives
others in our hearts
even in depths of our souls
have no answers for anything
just know what I believe
gets me thru the day
been thru many things just like you
although we live different lives
been many different places
we are close in some ways
some of our pain is the same
friendships come and go
have lost some along my journey
also have gained some
some we are only to share for a while
luvers have come and gone as well
we have seen pain there too
wounds seem to never heal
scars remind us that they do
© 2024 Flowergirl
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Re. Empty Spaces
29th Feb 2024 3:46am
I will always believe in you. You can do anything you put mind to. Keep on writing.
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1st Mar 2024 11:52pm
Hey Phantom, thank you for always being an encouragement, I believe in you too, sometimes it seems at times ourselves are the only ones we can count on. Purple luv & hugs 💜
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29th Feb 2024 8:13am
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1st Mar 2024 11:56pm
Hey Ron, always happy when stop by and wave, thank you for the honor of your read and for the RL. Purple luv & hugs 💜
Re. Empty Spaces
Dear FG,
Alas, how true. Your poem reminds me how fleeting some things can be and what we were meant to learn from them. Sometimes those things seemed so random I don’t know how to process them and that’s when I go shopping. I shop a lot 😊
Poignant write. H🌷
Alas, how true. Your poem reminds me how fleeting some things can be and what we were meant to learn from them. Sometimes those things seemed so random I don’t know how to process them and that’s when I go shopping. I shop a lot 😊
Poignant write. H🌷
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2nd Mar 2024 00:20am
Hey H, I luv what you take away from this ink, some decisions are easier than others, as for shopping, always a semi cure for the moment Lol! Honored by the RL, thank you. Purple luv & hugs 💜
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2nd Mar 2024 00:29am
Hey Thor, good to see a poet of your stature upon my ink, glad you enjoyed, thank you. Purple luv & hugs 💜
Re. Empty Spaces
29th Feb 2024 1:11pm
Scars remind us that they do. . .
Those final two lines. Wow! Well done, Flowered One! Good to see you back!
Those final two lines. Wow! Well done, Flowered One! Good to see you back!
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Re: Re. Empty Spaces
2nd Mar 2024 00:46am
Hey Ahavati, always a blessing to see you, they came from my own experiences of which I thought I would never get over. I know you understand, thank you for the honor of the RL. Purple luv & hugs 💜
Re. Empty Spaces
29th Feb 2024 5:05pm
What an incredibly deep poem. Those last couple lines are absolute power!
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2nd Mar 2024 00:49am
Hey Willow, I appreciate your thoughts always, sometimes I look deep within me and then realize there’s no more tears, thank you. Purple luv & hugs 💜
Re. Empty Spaces
10th Mar 2024 7:45am
Such a lovely and profound piece, dearest flowergirl.
"wounds seem to never heal
scars remind us that they do" > wow, just wow.
Flower on and purple on. Love and hugs 💜
"wounds seem to never heal
scars remind us that they do" > wow, just wow.
Flower on and purple on. Love and hugs 💜
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18th Mar 2024 00:30am
Hey Duende my friend, I’m thrilled to see you smiling upon my ink. Thank you for sharing thoughts with me. Purple luv & hugs 💜
Re. Empty Spaces
17th Mar 2024 4:36am
.....those scars become memories of how we obtained those wounds. Nothing last forever, which is why we should cling to what brings us joy. Oh Purple princess, I've missed you....xo
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18th Mar 2024 00:47am
Hey Rain, thrilled to see your beautiful smile. Luv your comment, yes cling to happy things and not let the memories consume us, I’ve done too much of that. Welcome back, I’ve missed you too. Purple luv & hugs 💜