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Moonless Night
With my shadow, the moon makes it three
and when I dance I kiss the wind adieu
listening to the crickets play a lullaby
as my shadow lay down at my feet
until I awaken without a companion
feeling alone on a moonless night
and when I dance I kiss the wind adieu
listening to the crickets play a lullaby
as my shadow lay down at my feet
until I awaken without a companion
feeling alone on a moonless night
Published 26th Feb 2024
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27th Feb 2024 6:33am
Dear A,
I enjoyed this piece. For me, there was a great sense of separateness between self, shadow and moon yet blending them together they made a trio of comfier for each other. Lovely piece. H🌷
I enjoyed this piece. For me, there was a great sense of separateness between self, shadow and moon yet blending them together they made a trio of comfier for each other. Lovely piece. H🌷
27th Feb 2024 1:49pm
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