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Morning Senses
This sunrise
Is the best
Morning sighs,
The senses
Come alive
For the life,
A scent wafts
Of coffee
Steamed dreams,
Squirrels romp,
Leap and lunge
Airs above,
Honey taste
Melts in heat
Stirred slowly,
Embracing
Sensory
Discovers.
Is the best
Morning sighs,
The senses
Come alive
For the life,
A scent wafts
Of coffee
Steamed dreams,
Squirrels romp,
Leap and lunge
Airs above,
Honey taste
Melts in heat
Stirred slowly,
Embracing
Sensory
Discovers.
Published 24th Feb 2024
Author's Note
Tricube form poem chain. Each line has 3 syllables, each stanza has 3 lines. This is a Tricube
You may also read this poem on Medium:: https://medium.com/zen-poetry/morning-senses-a469c27b3755
You may also read this poem on Medium:: https://medium.com/zen-poetry/morning-senses-a469c27b3755
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24th Feb 2024 8:26pm
24th Feb 2024 8:54pm
24th Feb 2024 9:11pm
It's very good, Kathy, really quite soothing. Makes one want to get up & enjoy the sun-lit morning. Reminds me of one I wrote called, 'Heavens Above'. Mine's slightly longer as I included the afternoon & evening appreciation also. :-)
24th Feb 2024 9:14pm
Cool, I'll have to stop by and read yours! Thanks for reading and commenting! <3 Bug
25th Feb 2024 12:31pm
28th Mar 2024 9:16pm
This poem beautifully captures the essence of a morning awakening, painting a vivid picture of the senses coming alive with the sunrise. The imagery of scent, taste, and sound creates a multisensory experience for the reader, drawing them into the scene of a tranquil morning. The use of concise and evocative language enhances the poem's impact, making it a delightful exploration of the beauty found in everyday moments. Overall, it's a lovely expression of appreciation for the simple pleasures of life.
30th Mar 2024 9:46pm
31st Mar 2024 00:20am
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3rd Aug 2024 00:57am
