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Proof of Life
In the westward sky is a crow's clear caw.
A visceral proof of life.
That there joyously exists more than just our strife.
It soared mystically deep into the baby blue
and fluffy white blissful unknown.
In the north sky
gathers a small murder of crows,
with their chaotic excitable moan.
A folktale goes that the crows congregate
to hover and decide another crow's fate.
Place a scavenger of death in a vast cheerful sky.
You realize a great many days are void of a why
They are just proof of life.
So feel alive!
A visceral proof of life.
That there joyously exists more than just our strife.
It soared mystically deep into the baby blue
and fluffy white blissful unknown.
In the north sky
gathers a small murder of crows,
with their chaotic excitable moan.
A folktale goes that the crows congregate
to hover and decide another crow's fate.
Place a scavenger of death in a vast cheerful sky.
You realize a great many days are void of a why
They are just proof of life.
So feel alive!
Author's Note
Upon stepping out my door this morning.......
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Re. Proof of Life
21st Feb 2024 1:36pm
A fascinating poem about crows. A wonderful flow and with such atmosphere.
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21st Feb 2024 1:43pm
Aww. Thanks so much.
I like to read facts about crows, lol
Thx for reading!
See just like that I stepped outside and was totally inspired.
Random.
I like to read facts about crows, lol
Thx for reading!
See just like that I stepped outside and was totally inspired.
Random.
Re. Proof of Life
21st Feb 2024 1:41pm
Crows are harbinger of misfortune as they say, but we should ne'er be superstitious about futile signs..
this is life with its ups and downs, and crows may even represent happy things, just watch around you when they appear.once more.''All is in the mind and the feeling and the mood ''
Stay happy despite Poe's the Raven.....
this is life with its ups and downs, and crows may even represent happy things, just watch around you when they appear.once more.''All is in the mind and the feeling and the mood ''
Stay happy despite Poe's the Raven.....
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Re: Re. Proof of Life
21st Feb 2024 1:46pm
I agree with everything you said. Thank you. To me the sight of
the soaring crow was happy and peaceful.
I could prob write a dark crow poem too, I think I have, lol
Thx for stopping bye!
the soaring crow was happy and peaceful.
I could prob write a dark crow poem too, I think I have, lol
Thx for stopping bye!
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21st Feb 2024 1:49pm
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21st Feb 2024 6:14pm
Me too, thanks Lil. Just a moment in nature can change the course of my day.
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2024 00:07am
Crows are such intelligent creatures. With crazy incredible memories. Always felt crows to be good luck & treat them with respect. Loved the imagery woven in this

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23rd Feb 2024 1:25am