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I Wish That I Could
I wish that I could fuck a tree,
To feel its life inside of me.
In whispered secrets it might share
As Aspin leaves rustle in my hair.
Its roots delve deep, in earth's embrace,
Then enter me with nature's grace,
I wish that I could fuck a tree.
And feel its life inside of me.
To feel its life inside of me.
In whispered secrets it might share
As Aspin leaves rustle in my hair.
Its roots delve deep, in earth's embrace,
Then enter me with nature's grace,
I wish that I could fuck a tree.
And feel its life inside of me.
Published 19th Feb 2024
Author's Note
During a childhood vacation I saw the Aspen trees for the first time. I wish I could go back to Colorado and see them again.
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19th Feb 2024 5:38pm
Sounds like the deepest desire of a wood nymph, or dryad, as in the Olympian myths of ancient Greece.
20th Feb 2024 4:23am
Sometime ago, a woman named Kate Cunningham married a tree, and the last I heard she is still married to it! So I guess this sort of thing is relatable. Since I'm a straight male, I tend to experience arousal on seeing objects that resemble vulva lips or breasts, but *so far* I've not been moved to express that arousal poetically. That may change, though, one day!🙂 Anyway, thank you for the poem, so full of imagery and feeling. 🙏
20th Feb 2024 11:51am
Thank you so much for reading and your insightful comment. It's nice when another human shares honestly. I look forward to reading your writing.
20th Feb 2024 12:31pm
Excellent. The imagination has an amazing way to create erotic pleasure. Loved the metaphor. Hugs and love, Oral
20th Feb 2024 11:15pm
Everyone has a favorite tree. Enjoy nature with the one you love. Keep on writing.
