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Ain't no saint
Devil on my shoulder,
Drank the angel down.
Black wolf came in the pack.
Took the leaders crown.
Clasped my calloused hands to pray.
But darkness finds away
Dog eat dog
Kill or be killed
Tryed like hell to get to heavens gate
But darkness finds away
Drank the angel down.
Black wolf came in the pack.
Took the leaders crown.
Clasped my calloused hands to pray.
But darkness finds away
Dog eat dog
Kill or be killed
Tryed like hell to get to heavens gate
But darkness finds away
Published 15th Feb 2024
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18th Feb 2024 00:38am
"drank the angel down" - that's a very far-reaching, excellent poetic and punchy line.
(PS: last word of the poem: "away" or should that be 'a way'?)
(PS: last word of the poem: "away" or should that be 'a way'?)
18th Feb 2024 00:44am
18th Feb 2024 2:32am
I had to slowly digest the mentality of your words and the energy behind the words since that is where the power of persuasion belies, and I see you have gathered some very resonating stanzas boarding in the realm of philosophical encased in some pondering metaphors, I do admire how you laid the foundation of your truth at stated at face value.
Enjoy your evening on that insightful vibe, my poet, and have a restful Sunday.
Enjoy your evening on that insightful vibe, my poet, and have a restful Sunday.
18th Feb 2024 2:37am
Lol you talk to smart for my country azz. I think you complimented so I think thank you yea
18th Feb 2024 3:17am
Ahh.. listen to you, I bow to your receptiveness, in addition, you are humanly welcome.
